Tuesday, May 31, 2011

~ Windows ~

Thus, You Let me See through you,
Let feel the drizzle soft,
To Let me 'til Eternity, Stare,
At Petals touched by morning dew.

Through thy Limited Vicinity, Steep,
Many Conscious Dreams I Dreamt,
And Presumptuous, I, Do fondly Dwell,
On 'Em, Unforgettable few.



Morning sun, you Let pass, Slow,
To brighten Grim filled Days,
Let Enter through, your 'sparkle' cracks,
My perfect morning View.


Purple - Red, My Flowers Swell,
Lay sad with Wilted leaves.
Until your passing light rays neared,
And quick, They fondly Grew.




Dark at Night, You would Stay put,
Fighting your Mild Disdain,
To Keep my fears of loss at ease.
Soften 'em drops of Rain.

Dust Lay settled upon my memories,
Gently dead and slain,
'Til you let me see through you,
My Olden, window pane.

10 comments:

  1. Beautifully expressed :)
    I loved your word selection..
    Keep sharing such beautiful posts :)

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  2. Hi Simran, Long time! :)
    Thanks for the visit, much appreciated! :)

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  3. Hi Psychebubbles - beautiful poem.. very vivid imagery of the window serving as a bioscope to wonderful nature:)

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  4. Hey Sanjeev!
    Thanks for your kind words! Glad you liked the effort! Keep visiting! :)

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  5. I enjoyed this. Really liked the language styling, was novel, and for such an unused voice, one could presume it would hinder flow, but this was not the case, not at all. Thanks for sharing:)

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  6. nice but too mild
    me personally not impressed
    hah

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  7. and take this smile in case you start getting too doggy angry
    :)

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  8. love the imagery.


    Invite you to write for week 5 challenge,
    Hope all is well.
    Thanks for the attention.
    Appreciate your input.
    Cheers.

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