Monday, May 16, 2011

- Colourless -















Felt no pain, I lay perfect,
As her shadow cried unheard,
Felt no remorse, i lay untouched,
The fingers gently, went Cold.

Stolen shades of yellow, bright,
Scattered, my borrowed canvas white,
For that abstraction of green, Broken,
Dimly went Unfold.

On that picture of our unison,
With subtle strokes of imagination,
Half dried paint, abandoned,
I had Emptied, my dreams of Gold.

Gently I let go of the crimson,
Lay with lifeless monochrome,
Roamed, I mindless, everywhere,
Searching the rainbow I Sold.

14 comments:

  1. same old stuff I read on so many blogs

    ReplyDelete
  2. @Teri
    Thanks for the visit, Just scribbled away! :)

    ReplyDelete
  3. @the feeling lioness.
    Sorry to have lead you to reading my amateur attempts @ poetry. :)
    Feel free to abandon my space! :)

    ReplyDelete
  4. Not sure my comment made it, so again: lovely and dreamy!

    ReplyDelete
  5. super imagery.
    simply enjoyed the flow.
    Happy Potluck!

    ReplyDelete
  6. I love this! Every part, the second stanza was especially compelling. I wish I were so talented, this is truly amazing

    ReplyDelete
  7. @Ina thanks! :) Glad u liked d effort! :)

    ReplyDelete
  8. @Jingle
    Thanks, enjoying all the posts! :)

    ReplyDelete
  9. @mindlovemisery...
    Thanks. Too modest, arent u? :D
    Loved ur share's a lot! Keep writing! :)

    ReplyDelete
  10. @Luna
    yay! Thanks for the visit! :D

    ReplyDelete

LinkWithin

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...