Thursday, April 21, 2011

~ StarStruck ~













To wish upon a star,
I look up, Elated.
Crimson sky, starless.

Empathy, Shallow, Couldn't suffice.
The Want, Agitated.
Powerless.

Ties of Emotions Tepid,
Vivid flashes of vice, Insipid,
Subtle Denial, Emptiness.

Newly Infused Insomniac,
Blemished Virtues i Lack,
Keep coming Back, Haunting.

Gently Swaying Trees Liars,
Silver Moonlight averse, Retires.
Into the Darkness, Endless.

Shimmering Sight of Mournful Glee,
Thinking of What could Be.
I look up.
To wish upon a star.
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8 comments:

  1. Tripthi BattapadiApril 21, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    Awesome. Period.

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  2. psychebubblesApril 21, 2011 at 9:02 PM

    Blueeeeee :)
    Thanks! :))

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  3. AnonymousApril 21, 2011 at 11:02 PM

    beautiful and something i feel at many times...

    I put this in my clambake okay?

    Love,
    Luna

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  4. psychebubblesApril 24, 2011 at 11:15 PM

    Hey Luna,
    Thanks a lot. Ure too kind, looking forward to your clambake. :))

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  5. magiceyeApril 25, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    each verse is a standalone poem too! lovely!

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  6. psychebubblesApril 25, 2011 at 1:30 PM

    @MagicEye, Thanks. :))

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  7. PurviMay 16, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    I can completely relate to this.. beautifully penned!

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  8. psychebubblesMay 18, 2011 at 6:07 PM

    @Purvi,
    Thanks a lot! :)))

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