Wednesday, November 30, 2011

~ NumbnesS ~

And when i thought, it was coming back to me, it went away.
The hair of my beloved Slipping commotion-less,
Through my shaking fingers, as she left me.
Blinded by the mockery, I motionless lay.

The brightness, withered slowly.
Countless bleeding drops of heartbreak, falling back in my cortex.
Slipping through the moments past, the heart sunk in the growing Numbness.
My shaking fingers, shivered.

Pacing raindrops, ascend.
Ageing senses,
The fire,
Burn alike.

Soulless freaks within,
Scream aloud.
Aimless,
I roam about.

22 comments:

  1. Hey dear..
    Nice to read you after so long!
    Beautifully carved and expressed the pain within..
    A feeling of completely lost..The heartache of losing beloved ones!

    Take care..

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  2. Beautifully written. Abstract with a difference!

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  3. Hmm..Your words express the grief...Beautifully written :)

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  4. HEy Simran.
    Thanks. Yeah, wasnt blogging much.

    Thanks as always for your presence.
    Psyche

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  5. @Deboshree.
    Thanks, glad you liked it! :)

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  6. Hi G2. Welcome to myspace.
    Glad u found it glance-worthy :)

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  7. @Saru.. Thanks! :)

    Hi Jyothi.. Thanks for the kind words: :)

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  8. Wonderful write! Heavy stuff!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/the-best-christmas-ever/

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  9. beautiful choice of words! this was truly beautiful and filled with much depth

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  10. goodbye is always sad. :(
    happy gooseberry day!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/21/les-miettes-dun-passe/

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  11. @untitledmoments
    Thanks for the wonderful comment! :)

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  12. @lynn,
    Thanks. Festive greetings for you as well.
    Be cheerful! :)

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  13. sad piece, bless you.
    Thanks for the powerful reminder.

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  14. @morning.
    Thanks. Happy holidays! :)

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