Tuesday, March 22, 2011

~ Rescue Me ~


















Eyes, Bewitching.
Gentle, Smile.

I,
Bewitched,
Gently famished,
Lost,
Fragile.

Dubious desire,
Don't be a dream,
Docile, Yet,
Looked around,
Lost & Found.
Grim Soulful Mist,
I,
The optimist.

Your Eyes Bewitching,
Hypnotize,
And I,
Docile, Trapped,
Stained wall,
Silently,
Bleeding Fist.

Profound, compounded cacophony,
In my head,
Gentle Agony,
For one smile.
Rescue Me,
It's been a while.

20 comments:

  1. on second reading and connecting things in retrospect (obviously your previous posts)... your object of desire is pretty interesting. As in bewitching, gentle, patient, someone willing to completely surrender and yet hold back.

    Dude, even I am interested in her. :D

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  2. Niti...

    Haha, Probably a seriously messed up wish, but yeah well i do want some weird stuff in my life. This seems to be one such thing? eh.. iono..

    Less Drama in my love life for sometime now, so i can expand my search engine! :P

    PS - U crack me up! :P

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  3. My first visit and I am glad I dropped by! Nice poem.

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  4. 'Unless it's mad, passionate, extraordinary love, it's a waste of your time. There are too many mediocre things in life. Love shouldn't be one of them'

    Even if it's a dream for an insomniac. It's worth dreaming, me thinks. :)

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  5. @Simran, Thanks...

    @Nikita, Welcome to my space. Glad u liked the effort! :)

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  6. @Niti...

    Well, ive had my ups and downs so, yeah love isnt one of the things im worrying about. :) U? Love-struck, or Insomniac? :P

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  7. Beautiful poem :)

    You'v got a New Follower!
    Defiant Princess
    http://khanvibes.blogspot.com/

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  8. I like your selection of words, they are complete and your way of composing is very melodic :)

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  9. Hey Princess.
    Thanks, Did check out your space too, lovely space. Thanks for d follow! :)

    @Lovish
    Thanks dude, Appreciated! :)
    Keep visiting! :)

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  10. each verse a poem by itself... lovely!

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  11. you say it best, when you say nothin' at all... such brevity of words, such profound depth. I am truly amazed...soulful poignant imagery.

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  12. @Magiceye.. Thanks, always encouraging! :)))

    @SO
    Thanks, really appreciated! Keep visiting! :)

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  13. well said... and nice imagery -robin

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  14. Heya Robin, Thanks, Really appreciated! :)

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  15. Brilliant ... love the flow of words/imagery, and it's haunting somehow. :)

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  16. This was a tongues delight to read out loud.

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  17. @Mypastmademe.

    Thanks a lot, looking forward to more of your presence and interactions here. :))

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  18. @KMcGee

    Glad you were able to enjoy it! Thanks for the kind words! :)

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