And when i thought, it was coming back to me, it went away.
The hair of my beloved Slipping commotion-less,
Through my shaking fingers, as she left me.
Blinded by the mockery, I motionless lay.
The brightness, withered slowly.
Countless bleeding drops of heartbreak, falling back in my cortex.
Slipping through the moments past, the heart sunk in the growing Numbness.
My shaking fingers, shivered.
Pacing raindrops, ascend.
Ageing senses,
The fire,
Burn alike.
Soulless freaks within,
Scream aloud.
Aimless,
I roam about.
The hair of my beloved Slipping commotion-less,
Through my shaking fingers, as she left me.
Blinded by the mockery, I motionless lay.
The brightness, withered slowly.
Countless bleeding drops of heartbreak, falling back in my cortex.
Slipping through the moments past, the heart sunk in the growing Numbness.
My shaking fingers, shivered.
Pacing raindrops, ascend.
Ageing senses,
The fire,
Burn alike.
Soulless freaks within,
Scream aloud.
Aimless,
I roam about.
Hey dear..
ReplyDeleteNice to read you after so long!
Beautifully carved and expressed the pain within..
A feeling of completely lost..The heartache of losing beloved ones!
Take care..
Beautifully written. Abstract with a difference!
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ReplyDeleteHEy Simran.
ReplyDeleteThanks. Yeah, wasnt blogging much.
Thanks as always for your presence.
Psyche
@Deboshree.
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@MagicEye
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Hi G2. Welcome to myspace.
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Profound expression!
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great one,
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beautiful choice of words! this was truly beautiful and filled with much depth
ReplyDeletegoodbye is always sad. :(
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@summer. Thanks a lot! :)
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@lynn,
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Be cheerful! :)
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the powerful reminder.
@morning.
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