The Rain, Unending.
Merciless showers.
Romance, sucked out of its Serenity.
Showers, Merciless,
Ruefully Abused.
The droplets on the window pane, Unused.
Washed away.
Silent Commotion.
Momentary lapse of Motion.
Another Affectionate swipe,
Darkness,
The end, Still Far Away.
And the loneliness of my deserted furniture,
Averted my attention.
It isn't the Rain.
Evading Romance like Everyday,
I stared through the tinted glasses, Again.
Awaiting the chance,
To Run Away.
Merciless showers.
Romance, sucked out of its Serenity.
Showers, Merciless,
Ruefully Abused.
The droplets on the window pane, Unused.
Washed away.
Silent Commotion.
Momentary lapse of Motion.
Another Affectionate swipe,
Darkness,
The end, Still Far Away.
And the loneliness of my deserted furniture,
Averted my attention.
It isn't the Rain.
Evading Romance like Everyday,
I stared through the tinted glasses, Again.
Awaiting the chance,
To Run Away.
Interesting piece with a few things going on in here. Really good write. Have to take it in slowly. Ties things up nicely in the last stanza but it's the second that makes it for me, really good. Also, it's pouring here, so it was a good backdrop to the poem. Thanks
ReplyDeleteIt's so deep..The thought and essence of this poem will linger on my mind for a longtime!
ReplyDeletecreative and thought provoking sentiments, smiles.
ReplyDeletehow divine creations.
check out short story slam week 7 today, you will make it perfectly.
@Fred.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for those kind words.
Glad you found the words appealing! :)
Keep scribbling!
Psyche
@Alcina.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. Glad you found it interesting! :)
Psyche
@bluebellbooks.
ReplyDeleteWas a little out of blogging. Will surely try and make it into the recent slam!
Thanks for your presence! :)
Psyche!