Felt no pain, I lay perfect,
As her shadow cried unheard,
Felt no remorse, i lay untouched,
The fingers gently, went Cold.
Stolen shades of yellow, bright,
Scattered, my borrowed canvas white,
For that abstraction of green, Broken,
Dimly went Unfold.
On that picture of our unison,
With subtle strokes of imagination,
Half dried paint, abandoned,
I had Emptied, my dreams of Gold.
Gently I let go of the crimson,
Lay with lifeless monochrome,
Roamed, I mindless, everywhere,
Searching the rainbow I Sold.
Very beautiful!
ReplyDeletesame old stuff I read on so many blogs
ReplyDelete@Teri
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit, Just scribbled away! :)
@the feeling lioness.
ReplyDeleteSorry to have lead you to reading my amateur attempts @ poetry. :)
Feel free to abandon my space! :)
neat!
ReplyDelete@Magiceye,
ReplyDeleteThanks :))
Not sure my comment made it, so again: lovely and dreamy!
ReplyDeletesuper imagery.
ReplyDeletesimply enjoyed the flow.
Happy Potluck!
I love this! Every part, the second stanza was especially compelling. I wish I were so talented, this is truly amazing
ReplyDeletelovely.
ReplyDelete@Ina thanks! :) Glad u liked d effort! :)
ReplyDelete@Jingle
ReplyDeleteThanks, enjoying all the posts! :)
@mindlovemisery...
ReplyDeleteThanks. Too modest, arent u? :D
Loved ur share's a lot! Keep writing! :)
@Luna
ReplyDeleteyay! Thanks for the visit! :D