Tuesday, March 22, 2011

~ Rescue Me ~


















Eyes, Bewitching.
Gentle, Smile.

I,
Bewitched,
Gently famished,
Lost,
Fragile.

Dubious desire,
Don't be a dream,
Docile, Yet,
Looked around,
Lost & Found.
Grim Soulful Mist,
I,
The optimist.

Your Eyes Bewitching,
Hypnotize,
And I,
Docile, Trapped,
Stained wall,
Silently,
Bleeding Fist.

Profound, compounded cacophony,
In my head,
Gentle Agony,
For one smile.
Rescue Me,
It's been a while.
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20 comments:

  1. NitiMarch 23, 2011 at 9:46 AM

    Excellent! :)

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  2. NitiMarch 23, 2011 at 9:51 AM

    on second reading and connecting things in retrospect (obviously your previous posts)... your object of desire is pretty interesting. As in bewitching, gentle, patient, someone willing to completely surrender and yet hold back.

    Dude, even I am interested in her. :D

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  3. psychebubblesMarch 23, 2011 at 1:34 PM

    Niti...

    Haha, Probably a seriously messed up wish, but yeah well i do want some weird stuff in my life. This seems to be one such thing? eh.. iono..

    Less Drama in my love life for sometime now, so i can expand my search engine! :P

    PS - U crack me up! :P

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  4. SimranMarch 23, 2011 at 4:13 PM

    Wow..
    Nicely written :)

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  5. IreMarch 23, 2011 at 11:58 PM

    My first visit and I am glad I dropped by! Nice poem.

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  6. NitiMarch 24, 2011 at 10:12 AM

    'Unless it's mad, passionate, extraordinary love, it's a waste of your time. There are too many mediocre things in life. Love shouldn't be one of them'

    Even if it's a dream for an insomniac. It's worth dreaming, me thinks. :)

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  7. psychebubblesMarch 24, 2011 at 3:29 PM

    @Simran, Thanks...

    @Nikita, Welcome to my space. Glad u liked the effort! :)

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  8. psychebubblesMarch 24, 2011 at 3:36 PM

    @Niti...

    Well, ive had my ups and downs so, yeah love isnt one of the things im worrying about. :) U? Love-struck, or Insomniac? :P

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  9. Defiant PrincessMarch 24, 2011 at 6:32 PM

    Beautiful poem :)

    You'v got a New Follower!
    Defiant Princess
    http://khanvibes.blogspot.com/

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  10. AusdrucklosMarch 25, 2011 at 5:04 AM

    I like your selection of words, they are complete and your way of composing is very melodic :)

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  11. psychebubblesMarch 25, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    Hey Princess.
    Thanks, Did check out your space too, lovely space. Thanks for d follow! :)

    @Lovish
    Thanks dude, Appreciated! :)
    Keep visiting! :)

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  12. magiceyeMarch 26, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    each verse a poem by itself... lovely!

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  13. TrishaMarch 30, 2011 at 9:08 PM

    you say it best, when you say nothin' at all... such brevity of words, such profound depth. I am truly amazed...soulful poignant imagery.

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  14. psychebubblesApril 4, 2011 at 2:51 PM

    @Magiceye.. Thanks, always encouraging! :)))

    @SO
    Thanks, really appreciated! Keep visiting! :)

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  15. Robin Ellen LucasApril 22, 2011 at 7:13 PM

    well said... and nice imagery -robin

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  16. psychebubblesApril 24, 2011 at 11:17 PM

    Heya Robin, Thanks, Really appreciated! :)

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  17. AnonymousApril 25, 2011 at 5:42 AM

    Brilliant ... love the flow of words/imagery, and it's haunting somehow. :)

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  18. K McGeeApril 26, 2011 at 11:11 PM

    This was a tongues delight to read out loud.

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  19. psychebubblesApril 27, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    @Mypastmademe.

    Thanks a lot, looking forward to more of your presence and interactions here. :))

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  20. psychebubblesApril 27, 2011 at 1:32 PM

    @KMcGee

    Glad you were able to enjoy it! Thanks for the kind words! :)

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